Checkmate!!!

So the new spoiler is that Nisha breaks the engagement because Bhaiya was staring at Sonakshi while on his engagement to Nisha. Good for her!!!

So I thought I will write the screenplay here. I know this is not how CVs will show it. But I hope in real life this is how things work out. Enjoy!!!


The engagement is in full swing. Sonakshi comes there. Bhaiya is staring at her.

The Bhaiya squad is praying Sonakshi to humiliate Nisha's family by getting into a cat fight with Nisha over Bhaiya. But Sonakshi is silent.

The engagement ceremony begins. Bhaiya squad is panicking. Bijoy is happy though.

Bhaiya asks Nisha to dance. He keeps stealing glances at Sonakshi. Nisha notices it.

Sonakshi is sad but she always wanted Dev to be happy. So she stays silent.

Finally the dance ends. 

Soha and Golu dance hoping that Sonakshi will get jealous seeing them happy. But Sonakshi still doesn't say anything.

Finally the time comes for engagement.

Radha: Dev beta. Put engagement ring on Nisha.

Bhaiya is going to put the engagement ring on Nisha looking at Sonakshi. He misses her finger and in typical TV show fashion, the ring roles over to Sonakshi. She brings the ring back to Dev. 

Dev is now getting worried. 

But he has to do the engagement now. So he again tries to put the ring on Nisha.

Nisha says: Stop.

Bhaiya coming out of his daze: Sorry, what?

Nisha: What are you doing? 

Bhaiya confused: Getting engaged.

Nisha: To whom? 

Bhaiya stammers: You.

Nisha: Then why are you ogling your ex the whole time?

Bhaiya keeps stammering.

Nisha: Shut up. I asked both of you if you wanted to get back together. You both said no and lied to me. If you think that I will marry a jerk who stares at another woman over my shoulder, you are kidding yourself.

Then she turns to Sonakshi: And you. Do you even have a little shame? You are having eye sex with my fiance after you came to my wedding as a guest. Seriously, I have never met a classless woman like you.

Bhaiya finally remembers his voice: You can't talk to Sonakshi like that. I was the one who made this plan so that Sonakshi confesses her feelings. I didn't want to force her. I wanted her to come back to me with her own free will.

Nisha laughs: Say what? You didn't want to force her and that's why you tried to manipulate her to be jealous? It's like saying that I don't want to force you to do as I say. But I will just torture you if you don't do as I say. But it's your free will. That's not a frigging free will.

She turns to Sonakshi: A man who does not think twice before playing with two women for his agenda, a man who does not care whom he hurts as long as he gets his way, a man who drools over one woman while being with another - can't be a man I can respect or spend the rest of my life with. He is all yours. Enjoy!!!

Bhaiya squad is happy that Nisha herself backed off. They didn't have much faith in Bhaiya knowing how useless he is. But they hope now Sonakshi will pick up the leftover.

Nisha was about to leave when Sonakshi says: Please stop.

Nisha looks at her. 

Sonakshi: You are right. I was a fool.

Bhaiya: Sonakshi, what are you saying? Now you can have me. 

Sonakshi: But I don't want you. 

Asha: What? Are you crazy? You have to want him. He is your fairy tale.

Sonakshi: Yes Maa. He is my fairy tale. But he is not the hero of my story. I am. I am the author, director and producer of my own life story - my own fairy tale. Someone who decides to write my life story as per their version can't be my prince charming.

Elena: But Sona, you love him.

Sonakshi: I do. And this game of yours reminded me what I had lost - my innocence, my trust in human kindness, my belief in love, my faith in commitment. I was sad for that woman who once loved without fear, without worrying about the consequences. But today I realized that to truly love someone, you have to love yourself first. And I haven't loved myself for a very long time. 

Nisha, thank you for reminding me who Sonakshi was. She was not weak and pathetic pawn to be played with using her feelings. I became one today because I let it happen. People whom I trusted played with my feelings as if I am a toy with no emotions, someone who does not feel pain. I was the fool. But no longer.

Soha: Mumma, Papa loves you. Why are you not marrying him? You love him too.

Sona: Soha, just because Papa loves me, it does not mean I have to marry him whether I am ready or not. I may love him because he was my first love and the father of my child. But I don't trust or respect him. And love is not enough to spend whole life together. Without trust and respect, even love fades away. 

And if I don't make you understand this, you will grow up thinking that you should live your life as per what others want regardless of what you want. I want you to understand that if any man uses one woman against you, you shouldn't feel flattered. Instead you should wonder what it says about his character. You should walk away and refuse to hurt another person. So I will fulfill the duties of a mother and lead by example.

Bijoy smiles: I am proud of you, beta.

Sonakshi smiles: Thanks Baba. For a while I lost my way. But I got it now. I won't be anyone's pawn anymore.

Bhaiya is angry: He was always against us. He never wanted me in your life.

Sonakshi: Shut up. He liked you until you screwed it up. He can't give you endless chances when you failed every time.

Just because now your mother likes me, you are all over me. But where was your so-called love when she didn't like me? And where will it go if she doesn't like me again? Where was your love when did not even tried to find out if I lived or died? 

You haven't given my father any reason to like you. You played games with my emotions and never stood by me. Which father will like such a man for his daughter? I can't marry a man who plays games with me and can hurt me to get what he wants. I was stupid before. But Nisha has opened my eyes.

She turns to Nisha: And I am sorry for the hurt I have caused you. We were both played by Dev. He used your emotions to play with mine. 

Nisha smiles: I forgive you. You were deceived too. So you are as much of a victim as I was.

Sonakshi extends her hand to Nisha: Friends?

Nisha smiles: Friends.

Sonakshi: I know this great coffee shop. Wanna have a cup?

Nisha: OMG. I can kill for caffeine.

Sonakshi: Okay then. Let me call another friend and we can hang around. 

She calls Jatin and asks him to meet at the coffee shop. He agrees.

Sonakshi: Shall we?

Nisha: Yes. Let's go.

They leave hand in hand while everyone watches the rarest of rare moment when two women decided to be friends instead of choosing to hate each other because of a man.

One instance when Pati, Patni aur Woh turned into Friends against a player.

The End!!!

Comments

  1. devakshi ko goli maro. I am a Nisha fan!

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    1. Yep. Nisha and Jatin rocks!!! Devakshi sucks.

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  2. But the latter part ain't happening. 😢😢😣😣

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  3. This is yo inform you guys that my brother bh otherwise known as usman, had a seizure and is admitted in the hospital this evening (GMT). Please, if possible, pray for him as this is not his first seizure. I request you to remember him in his prayers as he is in critical situation. I also wanted to post it in the forums which he liked to visit but I was not able to login from his account. If possible, plz convey this to the forums as well..

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    1. Absolutely !! We will pray for him --- stay strong

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    2. We are by your side Seema.

      I have full faith that your brother will recover safely. Stay strong and positive.

      :)

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    3. OMG. Sorry to hear that. Hope he gets well soon. Our prayers are with him.

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    4. Sorry to hear that Seema. Hope he gets well soon. Have faith.

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    5. Oh no.. May God be with Usman. Don't worry he will get better. He has our wishes

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  4. I like this screenplay !!

    And dev can learn to win sona back - u need to earn the respect of BB and go back to Bose house and begin all over :)

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    1. Yep. Now he has to prove himself or forever hold his peace.

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  5. Hi Tia, I am silent reader of your posts. I have been reading your posts from a very long time,. Actually i got interested in KRP after the leap and got interested in it for a while so visited the forum in india-forums and saw many posts but found yours the best one, but after the summer camp track the show went haywire and I lost interest in it but developed the same in your write ups.
    I find your writing intelligent, humorous and above all you call a spade a spade which is a remarkable quality. I was thinking of commenting but was very busy but today I got the time so I thought to appreciate your writing skills.
    I have learnt many things from your analysis posts on KRPKAB which I hope will help me in my future in dealing with marriage, my would be life partner, and life in general. Thank you Tia. All the best. May you keep spreading smiles and may you always remain happy and get more happiness in future.

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    1. Thank you so much. That's so sweet of you.

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    2. That is a very apt comment. I agree that Tia spreads smiles and positivity around. I am so happy to have read her posts and blog. Even though I don't watch This serial I visit this blog...

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  6. I can only wish this is true.
    How I wud want to see this.

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    1. Me too. That's why I wrote this story. 😭

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  7. Well written, however, this screenplay is a dream for Indian tv show viewers like us. For majority of fandom/Adarsh nari squad this will be a big no. They want the women to crawl, beg and apologise for the mistakes she never made. The man is allowed to make mistakes again and again because the women around him makes him a GOD everytime he makes a mistake. He is "The man" no matter how many women he slept with (yes Dev Dixit), still the hero. He is allowed to play with emotions of all the women in his life but Sonakshi cannot even have a coffee with her friend Jatin, you see against bharatiya naari terms and conditions. Sometimes I wonder, it must be the women who forced other women to follow "Sati Pratha" and it was only the men who fought against this tradition. Have we really abolished sati pratha (or is it just the name change) in the society when even today they are being asked to go through all the pain just for her husband and her family and not to think of herself.

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    1. That's where women are women's worst enemy phrase comes into effect. The thing is that the definition of Indian woman has been twisted to make it seem that to be an ideal Indian woman you have to be an emotional fool, submissive, no fuss, undemanding and low maintenance kind of person. But that's not the definition of any woman. That's the definition of an idiot. I know that the script writer will never write this. That's why I wrote this story. I needed to get it out of my system. I just could not take this weak and pathetic Sonakshi who is willing to take a man back who deceived another woman for her. Then what's the difference between him and Ayan who deceived Riya? The only difference is that Bhaiya did it for (or so he claims) for Lau and Ayan did it for money.

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  8. Loved it tia ur script is interesting ya

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    1. Thanks Shailu. I needed to release my frustrations. Lol... Writing is my way of channeling my frustrations.

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    2. True all are frustrated but we don't have patience like u tia

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  9. Nice humour. But illusions of grandeur. Will break like peices of glass when reality hits. Gud luck��.

    Maharathikarna

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    1. Oh I know very well that this will not be shown on screen. But this is something I want to see if this ever happens in real life to real people.

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  10. Nice one Tia.. .in real life this is exactly going to happen. But in the serial I want dev to break engagement. I know cvs are into reverse gear of s1. But it should make logic as well. Cannot they show dev standing or taking right decision.

    This Sonakshi confession makes no sense when problems have not solved. Don't know why cvs are rushing..

    Between in yday scene where sona sleeping and dev says something..erica looked amazingly beautiful. Though that scene did not make any sense. I was so busy looking at Erica. Later I was thinking what was the necessity of that scene? I think her make up was very good.

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    1. I hope so, Pramila. Yesterday's confession scene was good but it was as usual tainted by the fact that Bhaiya does everything right in private and everything wrong in public. That has never changed. And now he has involved another innocent girl in his game. Not done!!!

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  11. Hey guys..any one here from Qatar?? Hope things are f9 there.

    I am worried for people live in Qatar now. It seems many countries(jordan) embassy asked their people to leave. Hope problem solved soon. Loosing job, education disruptions and leaving country is not easy thing. It is going to cause lot of disruption. Hope and let's pray that problem solved soon.

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    1. Oh dear. If any of you are in Qatar, hope you are okay.

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  12. Ok.. it turns out that Bijoy is fighting a losing battle here. So he decides to let Sona go back to Dev.. ja Sona n.a. he says. I don't have an account on IF.. but one of Dev s die hard delusional fan needs to see some facts. Ultimately for her Nisha 's heartbreak is Sona and Bijoy fault m devakshi divorce is Bijoy s fault. Reading her responses made me want to break my head. Phew.. too much misogyny

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  13. Soumya here...

    OH WOW! How I wish this is shown... Loved it!

    Go Nisha and Go Jatin!!!!

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